Monday, 5 October 2015

As the flashing lights came towards me



       As the flashing lights came towards me. I tasted blood. I could not move my arms my legs or my head. Horrible thoughts ran through my head. Was I dead, did that kill me? I smelt smoke I heard ringing in my ears I saw darkness. Suddenly all of my body hurt, then I figured it out I wasn't dead. I was still alive. I woke up. ''Where am I '' I said? My mom told me I was at my house. I had been hit by a car last night. Then I fell asleep in my bed.               
 
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3 comments:

  1. Great use of descriptive language!

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  2. Hi Ronon,

    I really like your work it has lot and lots of descriptive language! When I was playing once a got it in the mouth and I tasted blood it tasted really wired. Have you every tasted blood? And your spelling is the BEST! Bye love your work bye till my next comment

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  3. Hi Ronon,

    I really like your work it has lot and lots of descriptive language! When I was playing once a got it in the mouth and I tasted blood it tasted really wired. Have you every tasted blood? And your spelling is the BEST! Bye love your work bye till my next comment

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